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Excessive usage Of social sites by students

In current era Web becomes more and more common as people become more socialize and also creates problems allots. Social networking sites SNS have attract millions of users. Social sites becoming profitable very important aspect in student’s life in last decades social sites adopted by people more and more very rapidly. Our generation spent huge time on net on daily basis they use desktop computers tablets, smart phones, e-readers, laptops all this tools to actively engage on social sites , social networking such as chatting sharing, ideas promoting their creativity blogging online learning, online gaming etc. Scholars prefer spent student more time on net for study purpose that is acceptable but using excessively social sites. Researchers concluded that excessive usage of SNS causes health issues, mostly students become addict of social site such as Facebook, twitter, my space etc. which is unhealthy anxiety depression causes by addiction also it has great influence on their academic performance.

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In current era Web becomes Using the web has become more and more common as people become more socialize and also creates problems allots. Social networking sites SNS have attract millions which has increased the number of people using social networks and created a lot of users problems . Social sites becoming profitable very important aspect in student’s life in last decades social networking sites adopted by people more and more very rapidly. Our generation spent huge time on net on daily basis they use desktop computers tablets , smart phones or SNSs , e-readers, laptops all this tools to actively engage on social sites , social networking such as chatting sharing, ideas promoting their creativity blogging online learning, online gaming etc. Scholars prefer spent student more time on net for study purpose that is acceptable but using excessively social sites. Researchers concluded that excessive usage have attracted millions of SNS causes health issues, mostly students become addict of social site such as Facebook, twitter, my space etc users . which is unhealthy anxiety depression causes by addiction also it has great influence on their academic performance.
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Good effort. I have only corrected the first 2 sentences. I recommend you write shorter essays until reach a higher level.
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Excessive usage Of social sites by students
In current era Web becomes more Usage of Internet and more common as people become more socialize and also creates problems allots Social Networking became a source of attraction for the new generation . Social networking sites SNS have attract millions of users. Social sites becoming profitable very important aspect in student’s life in last decades social sites adopted by people more It provides entertainment, education and business etc with a single click to its user. Although Internet and Social Networking usage has facilitated and more very rapidly. Our generation spent huge time on net benefited to its users to lot of extent but on daily basis they use desktop computers tablets, smart phones, e-readers, laptops all this tools the other hand its addiction has reduced physical activity in new generation to actively engage on social sites a lot of extent , social networking such as chatting sharing, ideas promoting their creativity blogging online learning, online gaming etc. Scholars prefer spent student more time on net for study purpose that is acceptable but using excessively which has ultimately created health problems while some of its users specially of school going age can not give proper attention towards their studies because they pass to much time on social sites. Researchers concluded that excessive usage of SNS causes health issues, mostly students become addict of social site such as Facebook, twitter, my space networks and online gaming etc. which is unhealthy anxiety depression causes by addiction also it has great influence on their academic performance.
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Hi Misbah Batool, I am new learner. I have written the essay as per my own thinking/ thoughts there is no doubt the essay you have written was far better but i want put my contribution so that i can also learn and furnish my English Language. Regards
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Excessive usage Of social sites by students
In the current era the Web becomes more and more common as people become more socialize socialized and also creates many problems allots . Social networking sites SNS have attract millions of users.
Social sites becoming profitable very important aspect in student’s life in last decades social sites adopted by people more and more
very rapidly. Our generation spent spends a huge amount of time on the net on a daily basis and they use desktop computers tablets, smart phones, e-readers, laptops , all this these tools to actively engage on social sites , social networking such as chatting sharing, ideas promoting their creativity , blogging , online learning, online gaming etc.
Scholars prefer spent student more time on net for study
purpose that purposes than is acceptable but using excessively social sites. Researchers concluded that excessive usage of SNS causes health issues, mostly students become addict of addicted to social site sites such as Facebook, twitter Twitter , my space etc. which is unhealthy anxiety . Anxiety and depression causes caused by addiction also it a has great influence on their academic performance.
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Thank you so much
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Excessive usage Of uses of social sites by students
In current era , Web becomes more and more common as people become more socialize and it also creates problems allots a lot . Social networking sites SNS have attract attracted millions of users user . Social sites are becoming profitable and it has become very important aspect in student’s life in last decades social . Social sites are adopted by people more and more very rapidly. Our generation spent huge time on net on daily basis they . They use all the tools like desktop computers , tablets, smart phones, e-readers, laptops all this tools to actively engage on social sites , social .Social networking such as chatting sharing, ideas promoting their creativity blogging online learning, online gaming etc. Scholars prefer spent student spending more time on net for study purpose that is acceptable but using excessively social sites. Researchers concluded that excessive usage uses of SNS causes health issues , mostly . Most students become addict of to social site such as Facebook, twitter, my space etc. which is unhealthy anxiety . Anxiety depression causes are caused by addiction .It also it a has great influence on their academic performance.
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Thank you so much
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