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ABOUT IMMIGRATION

People immigrate to get a better life. They leave their native country and go to another country for many reason such as construction works ,employ opportunities etc .the main reason is ,if they have faced natural disasters .
some people go for better education also.according to me ,it gives negative and positive thoughts. I would like to share the negative thoughts that is difficult in search of work and shelter. they worked as only a daily wages. they treated very badly not give respect them.they suffer to live as a ordinary person.they don't have enough food to eat and feed their families. survival of their families is also hard.they don't have a proper place to live. population were increased . competion for job were increased.they live in the unhygienic condition like slum areas. crime rate increases due to immigration.they children wont get a proper education ,they cant live freely.migrate people livehood was poverty.postive thoughts were we learn about culture customs and new language. due this brotherhood relation ship were increase.

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ABOUT IMMIGRATION
People immigrate to get a better life. They leave their native country and go to another country a different one for many reason reasons, such as construction works work , employ employment opportunities etc . the The main reason is ,if that they have faced a natural disasters disaster .
some Some people also go for a better education also . according to me In my opinion , it gives negative there are negatives and positive thoughts positives . I would like to share the negative thoughts that negatives; it is difficult in search of to find work and shelter. they worked as They work only a daily wages. they wage and are treated very badly not give without being given any respect them . they suffer They struggle to live as a an ordinary person. they They don't have enough food to eat and feed their families. survival of The life for their families is also hard. they They don't have a proper place to live. The population were is increased . competion Competition for job were jobs is increased. they They live in the unhygienic condition conditions like slum areas. The crime rate increases due to immigration. they Their children wont won't get a proper education , , they cant live freely. migrate people livehood was People who have migrated live in poverty. postive Positive thoughts were are that we learn about culture , customs and a new language. due Due to this , brotherhood relation ship were and relationships increase.
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ABOUT IMMIGRATION
People immigrate emigrate to get a better life. They leave their native country and go to another country for many reason reasons, such as employment opportunities in construction works , employ opportunities etc . . Often, the main reason is ,if that they have faced natural disasters .
some Some people also go for better education also opportunities . according to me In my opinion , it gives there are negative and positive thoughts. I would like to share the negative thoughts . I believe that is difficult in search of to find work and shelter. they worked as Work is available only on a daily wages. they wage, and migrants are often treated very badly and not give given respect them . they suffer They struggle to live as a ordinary person people . they don't have Having not enough food to eat and to feed their families . , and without a proper place to live, survival of their families is also hard. they don't have a proper place to live. With increasing population were increased . competion for job were increased.they live and competition for jobs, combined with unhygienic living conditions in the unhygienic condition like slum areas . , crime rate increases due to immigration.they children wont rates increase. Migrant children may not get a proper education , they cant and can't live freely. migrate Generally, migrant people livehood was live in poverty. postive thoughts were we On the positive side, migrants can learn about a new culture and new customs and new language . due this , resulting in increased brotherhood relation ship were increase and relationships .
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Awesome,
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ABOUT IMMIGRATION
People immigrate emigrate to get a better life. They leave their native country and go to another country for many reason reasons, such as employment opportunities in construction works , employ opportunities etc . . Often, the main reason is ,if that they have faced natural disasters .
some Some people also go for better education also opportunities . according to me In my opinion , it gives there are negative and positive thoughts. I would like to share the negative thoughts . I believe that is difficult in search of to find work and shelter. they worked as Work is available only on a daily wages. they wage, and migrants are often treated very badly and not give given respect them . they suffer They struggle to live as a ordinary person people . they don't have Having not enough food to eat and to feed their families . , and without a proper place to live, survival of their families is also hard. they don't have a proper place to live. With increasing population were increased . competion for job were increased.they live and competition for jobs, combined with unhygienic living conditions in the unhygienic condition like slum areas . , crime rate increases due to immigration.they children wont rates increase. Migrant children may not get a proper education , they cant and can't live freely. migrate Generally, migrant people livehood was live in poverty. postive thoughts were we On the positive side, migrants can learn about a new culture and new customs and new language . due this , resulting in increased brotherhood relation ship were increase and relationships .
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