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My favorite season

I like fall the most .
Because I can see lots of colorful leaves in the fall, besides it is the best weather to do outside activities.
Plus, I feel like I can be a person who think deeply. Since fall is good to go for a walk in calm down weather.

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My favorite season
I like fall the most . Because because I can see lots of colorful leaves in the fall, besides and it is the best weather to do outside outdoor activities. Plus Also , I feel like I can be a person who think deeply. Since because the weather is calm, fall is a good time to go for a walk in calm down weather , which allows me to think deeply .
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