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Life is beautiful but not always easy, it has problems, too, and the challenge lies in facing them with courage, letting the beauty of life act like a balm, which makes the pain bearable, during trying times, by providing hope

Happiness, sorrow, victory, defeat, day-night are the two sides of me. Similarly life is full of moments of joy, pleasure, success and comfort punctuated by misery, defeat, failures and problems. There is no human being on Earth, strong, powerful, wise or rich, who has not experienced, struggle, suffering or failure.

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Life
Life is beautiful but not always easy , it has . It presents problems , too, and the challenge lies in facing them with courage, letting the beauty of life act like a balm , which makes the pain bearable , during trying times , by providing hope .

Happiness
, and sorrow, victory , and defeat, day - and night are define the two sides of me. Similarly life Life is full of moments of joy, pleasure, success and comfort punctuated by misery, defeat, failures and problems. There is no human being on Earth, whether strong, powerful, wise or rich, who has not experienced, struggle, suffering or failure.
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I probably didn't help you much here. It's very poetic, and more of a matter of personal preference how to organize it I think. Great work!

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Life is beautiful but not always easy , it . It has problems , too , and the challenge lies in facing them with courage, letting the beauty of life act like a balm , which that makes the pain bearable , during trying times , by providing hope

Happiness
, and sorrow, victory , and defeat, and day - and night are the two sides of me. Similarly , life is full of moments of joy, pleasure, success and comfort punctuated by misery, defeat, failures and problems. There is no human being on Earth, no matter how strong, powerful, wise or rich, who has not never experienced , struggle, suffering or failure.
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It *is* rather nice, isn't it? There's a rhythm to it that I can't quite follow but leaves an impression.

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Life is beautiful but not as always easy as it seems , it has problems, struggles too ; however , and the challenge lies challenges lie in facing them with courage, letting the beauty of life act like a balm, which makes though making the pain bearable , during trying times, by providing hope and encouragement.

Happiness, sorrow, victory, defeat, day-night are representing the two sides of me. Similarly , life is full of moments of joy, pleasure, success and comfort punctuated by misery, defeat, failures and problems. There is no human being on Earth, earth - strong, powerful, wise or and rich, who has not experienced , struggle pain , suffering or failure and struggle but this is what makes life beautiful .
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Life
Life is beautiful but not always easy , it . It has problems , too, and the challenge lies in facing them with courage , letting . Let the beauty of life act like a balm, which makes to make the pain bearable, by providing hope during trying times , by providing hope

Happiness,
. Happiness and sorrow, victory , and defeat, day - and night , they are the two sides of me. Similarly life Life is full of moments of joy, pleasure, success and comfort punctuated by misery, defeat, failures and problems. There is no human being on Earth earth , whether strong, powerful, wise or rich, who has not experienced , any struggle, suffering or failure.
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