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Heavy tax pressurizes Japanese society

On October 1st, the Japanese government will be enacting a new tax regulation. The commodity tax which is imposed on every items people purchase will be increased by 2%, from 8% to 10%. As far as I know, a tax imposed on purchase has been increased by 5% during a 10-year period. People are not sure about in which field the government invests the tax. I imagine most of them hope their tax will be used in a right way for social infrastructure and elderly people and children who need help in their life. As a Japanese, I also hope the government makes use of our tax to organize social structure and improve citizens life.

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Nicely done, Yuka! The last sentence was a bit redundant, so I combined it with the second to last sentence.
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Heavy tax pressurizes High taxes pressure Japanese society
On October 1st, the Japanese government will be enacting enact a new tax regulation. The commodity tax , which is imposed on every items people purchase item purchased, will be increased increase by 2%, from 8% to 10%. As far as I know, a this tax imposed on purchase has been increased by only 5% during a over the last 10 -year period. People years and people are not sure about unsure in which field the government invests the tax income from it . I imagine most of them Japanese citizens, like myself, hope their tax will be used taxes are invested in a right way for social infrastructure and to support elderly people , children, and children others who need help in their life lives . As a Japanese, I also hope the government makes use of our tax to organize social structure and improve citizens life.
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Thank you very much for correcting my essay :)
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You're very welcome. I look forward to reading more!
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