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The dangers of taking medicine

I'm pretty aware of the importance of tranquilizers and anxiolytics, because suffering people are in an emergencial situation, but specially the period of addaptation must be looked at carefully.
The other day I met a person who had bought some goods I sell online. First she was very confused about the time and place where we would meet, about the product traded, about the price, every message we exchanged was complete miscommunication. Once we met, she started telling me really personal things, including the fact she was taking medicine because her daughter had moved to Poland and left her all alone in Brasil. She mentioned to be a retired person spending a lot of money on the internet.
I felt really sorry for her, because she could be so easily tricked! What a situation!

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Hey, nice work! Your English is pretty grammatically correct but in some cases it doesn't sound natural, so I've corrected a few things to make it sound a bit better. I'm also not entirely sure what you meant by "tranquilizers and anxiolytics"... Do you mean pain killers and anxiety medication?
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The dangers of taking medicine
I'm pretty aware of the importance of tranquilizers sedatives and anxiolytics, because suffering people are in an emergencial emergency situation, but specially the period of addaptation adaptation must be looked at carefully.
The other day I met
a person someone who had bought some goods I sell online. First At first, she was very confused about the meeting time and place where we would meet , about the product traded , and about the price , every . Every message we exchanged was complete miscommunication. Once When we met, she started telling me really personal things, including the fact she was taking medicine because her daughter had moved to Poland and left her all alone in Brasil. She mentioned to be that she was a retired person retiree spending a lot of money on the internet.
I felt really sorry for her
, because she could be so easily tricked! What a situation!
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The dangers of taking medicine
I'm pretty aware of the importance of tranquilizers and anxiolytics , because suffering people are in an emergencial emergency situation . However , but specially the period of addaptation adaptation must be looked at carefully.

The other day I met a person who had bought some goods I sell online. First
, she was very confused about the time and place where we would meet, about the product traded, and about the price , every . Every message we exchanged was a complete miscommunication. Once And when we met, she started telling me really personal things , including . These include the fact she was taking medicine because her daughter had moved to Poland and left her all alone in Brasil. She mentioned to be being a retired person spending a lot of money on the internet.
I felt really sorry for her
, because she could be so easily tricked! What a situation!
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