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To me, have a lot of things in a big problem. Firtly, to have things you need by then. So, you need to use your effort in things. There is one economics principle that affirm: we can do only one thing with money. So, or we buy things or have good experiences, like travel abroad. Both of them, we can’t do, because both need money to do. We need to choose only one.
To make thing we need natural resources. There aren’t natural resources to make things to everyone.
In other hand, simple experiences can be more important than expensive. For example, during my honeymoon, the best memories I’ve had was drinking wine inside the flat or walking in Paris with my wife. It’s very simples. So, to have important experiences we need love, justice and peace. It’s not associated with money or to have loads of things.

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Money
To me, have there a lot of things in a big problem. Firtly Firstly , to have things you need by then. So, you need to use your effort in things. There is one economics principle that affirm affirms : we can do only one thing with money. So, or we either buy things or have good experiences, like travel abroad. Both of them, we can’t do, because both need money to do. We need to choose only one.
To make
thing things, we need natural resources. There And there aren’t natural resources to make things to everyone.
In other On another hand, simple experiences can be more important than expensive things . For example, during my honeymoon, the best memories I’ve had was drinking wine inside the flat or walking in Paris with my wife. It’s very simples simple . So, to have important experiences we need love, justice , and peace. It’s not associated with money or to have loads of things.
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Money
To me, have a lot of things in there is a big problem. Firtly Firstly , to have things you need by then. So, you need to use your requires effort in things . There is one economics economic principle that we can affirm: we can do only one thing with money. So, or we we can either buy things or have good experiences, like travel travelling abroad. Both of them, we We can’t do both , because both need require money to do . We need to choose only one.
To make
thing things, we need natural resources. There aren’t enough natural resources to make things to for everyone.
In On the other hand, simple experiences can be more important than expensive things or experiences . For example, during my honeymoon, the best memories I ’ve had was drinking wine inside the flat or walking in Paris with my wife. It’s very simples simple . So, to have important experiences we need love, justice and peace. It’s not associated with money or to have having loads of things.
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Money
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To make
thing things we need natural resources. There aren’t enough natural resources to make things to for everyone.

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