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Traveling

Do you prefer traveling on your own or you'd rather have company?
Many people are surprised when I say I love traveling on my own, and I have to list the advantages: no coming to agreements about time and places, no getting worried if the other person is annoyed by my delay when I see something that really interests me, no pressure if I take too long to take pictures, no questioning why I've decided just to walk around aimlessly.
Another great advantage is that it's easier for people to approach you and start conversations, although it may be a little dangerous. When I sense a situation might be risky, I make up a mobile call, pretending I'm going to meet my trip mate later.
On the other hand, having a mate with you brings more warmth and you can share impressions, and you end up doing things that you would never come up with.

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Traveling
Do you prefer traveling on your own or you'd rather have company?
Many people are
surprised surprise when I say I love traveling on my own, and I have to list the advantages: no coming need to agreements come to an agreement about time and places place , no not getting worried if the other person is will be annoyed by my delay when I see something that really interests interest me, no pressure if I take too long to take pictures, no one questioning me why I've decided just to walk around aimlessly.
Another great advantage is that it's easier for people to approach you and start
conversations a conversation , although it may be a little dangerous. When I sense a situation might be risky, I will make up a mobile call, pretending I'm going to meet my trip mate later.
On the other hand, having a mate with you brings more warmth and you can share impressions, and you end up doing things that you would never come up with.
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The correct word was used in the initial essay - it is not "surprise" but "surprised" in this context.
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Traveling
Do you prefer traveling on your own or would you 'd rather have company?
Many people are surprised when I say I love traveling on my own, and I have to list the advantages: no coming to agreements about time and places, no getting worried if the other person is annoyed by my delay when I see something that really interests me, no pressure if I take too long to take pictures, no questioning why I've decided just to walk around aimlessly.
Another great advantage is that it's easier for people to approach you and start conversations, although it may be a little dangerous. When I sense a situation might be risky, I make up a mobile call, pretending I'm going to meet my trip mate later.
On the other hand, having a mate with you brings more warmth and you can share impressions, and you end up doing things that you would never come up with.
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Trix
Traveling
Do you prefer traveling on your own or would you 'd rather have company?
Many people are surprised when I say I love traveling on my own, and I have to list the advantages: no coming to agreements about time and
places place , no getting worried if the other person is annoyed by my delay when I see something that really interests me, no pressure if I take too long to take pictures, no questioning why I've decided just to walk around aimlessly.
Another great advantage is that it's easier for people to approach you and start conversations, although it may be a little dangerous. When I sense a situation might be risky, I make up a mobile call, pretending I'm going to meet my trip mate later.
On the other hand, having a mate with you brings more warmth and you can share impressions, and you end up doing things that you would never come up with.
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Overall, a great command of the English language! Great job.
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