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What are you passionate about? How did you find your passion and at what age did you realize it?

I was 26 years old when I realized that I am into fitness and that it is something that I think I can do even when I get older. I would love to be a personal or professional trainer someday. I love helping people trim down their unwanted fats, get fit and to stick to a diet that will enjoy. Then when I had my first born that's when I realized that I want to be a minimalist, an environmentalist, an investor, be an advocate of attachment parenting etc. There's just a lot of things that I am passionate about. Now I'd like to leave the corporate world and see what's in store for me by working from home and perhaps home school my daughter from preschool to grade school. How about you? Are you passionate with a lot of things as well? Is there such a thing that you can have 5 or more passion?

Feel free to comment and correct my essay. :)

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aprilsun
Hi Aileen! I am also an advocate for attachment parenting! That is my passion right now. I can't stop reading and taking about it... And most importantly, implement it in practice. :)
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Phillip.Laplana
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What are you passionate about? How did you find your passion and at what age did you realize it?

I was 26 years old when I realized that I am was into fitness and that it is was something that I think thought I can could do even when I get got older. I would love to be a personal or professional trainer someday. I love helping people trim down their unwanted fats fat , get fit and to stick to a diet that will enjoy. Then when When I had my first born that's when child, I realized that I want wanted to be a minimalist, an environmentalist, an investor, be an advocate of attachment parenting , etc. There's just a lot of things that I am passionate about. Now I'd like to leave the corporate world and see what's in store for me by working from home and perhaps home school schooling my daughter from preschool to grade school . How about you? Are you passionate with about a lot of things as well too ? Is there such a thing that Could you can have 5 five or more passion passions in life ?

Feel free to comment and correct my essay. :)
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Aileen.Cortes
Fair enough. Thank you for your time Philip! :)
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janahfacal..
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What are you passionate about? How did you find your passion and at what age did you come to realize it?

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 Feel free to comment and correct my essay. :)
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ikaymoreno
Hi Janah! Thank you for taking the time to make a correction. Learners helping other learners is a wonderful thing but we also should be careful about the information or correction we're sharing. :) (1) I was 26 years old when I realized that I was into fitness and something that I thought of doing when I get older. This sentence has parallelism issues. Since she's talking about something that happened in the past, the phrase that follows "and" should also be in past tense too. It should be parallel: "was 26 years old", "was into fitness", "was something I thought". (2) I would love to be a personal or professional trainer someday, helping people trim down their unwanted fats, get fit and stick to their diet plan. "I would like to be a professional trainer someday." should be a separate sentence. Also, fat is a mass noun so saying "fats" is incorrect. The next sentences also have a couple of errors. I'm just gonna stop here though because I gotta go cook lunch now. :) I hope you continue helping other learners. Please try and be more careful though.
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