Write & Correct
English

The power of culture

Brazil is worldwide known for Carnival, which is going to be celebrated in two weeks. This year we have a special situation because of the political context: the social group in power is trying to extinguish the party. They are step by step taking action to discredit and even vilify the cultural expression.
They spread images on social media, meaning this is not "fun for family type of people", they say it promotes bad moral and that people involved are connected with evil things, they promise events to compete with the parties, they use economic power to hinder what has always been a source of income to this country.
Despite this boycott, people involved in samba culture are working to make it a political Carnival too, with the schools of samba choosing parade and song themes that will bring what we are living here into public discussion.
I bet it will be very special, and I hope we do'nt have any violent reactions from either side. It will be an opportunity to check how powerful this tradition is.

Posted

Corrections

The power of culture
Brazil is worldwide known for Carnival, which is going to be celebrated in two weeks. This year , we have a special situation because of the political context: the social group in power is trying to extinguish the party. They are step by step taking action to discredit and even vilify the cultural expression.
They spread images on social media, meaning this is not "fun for family type of people"
, they . They say that it promotes bad moral and that people involved are connected with evil things , they . They promise events to compete with the parties , they . They use economic power to hinder what has always been a source of income to this country.
Despite this boycott, people involved in samba culture are working to make it a political Carnival too
, with . With the schools of samba choosing parade and song themes that will bring what we are living here into public discussion.
I bet it will be very special, and I hope we
do don ' nt t have any violent reactions from either side. It will be an opportunity to check how powerful this tradition is.
Posted

Comment(s)

Everything looks super great! But just to be careful with run-on sentences. You just need to avoid make sentences longer! That's all :)
Posted 
Thank you! But aren't run-on sentences independent ones? I was listing "their" attitudes to hinder the celebration, and that's why I used commas. In the last corrected sentence, it was an explanation.
Posted 
Feedback