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Some people arguing that technology affected our lives badly and other people think it is the best thing ever happened and the best to come yet.
A lot of people think that technology helped the man kind as it made the world like one big city by connecting people all over the world. It gives you the access to know any information any time any where. In the past people used to spend months searching for an information also to know news about other countries but now it's all one click away from you and takes only a second to know anything you want. Technology saved a lot of our time today. In favor of technology now we can use different methods in daily life to save our time and energy. With less effort and time you can save huge amount of data, calculate difficult mathematics, communicate and reach every thing.
On the other side, some people think that technology affected our mental health negatively, caused depression and a lot of problems. They say that it killed our feelings as a human beings and led to less interactions with other people in the real world as a lot of people now live their life most of the time on the virtual network. People also argue that now days there is no privacy for the individuals. Environment supporter arguing that technology destroying our planet and health.
It will remain as a conflict whether technology improved our lives or destroyed it but personally i think it helped us a lot.

Technology makes people's life easier. But it has some disadvantages at the same time though. So, it needs to be balance in regards to on how we use it in our daily lives.

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I think technology helps people a lot, For me more advantages rather than disadvantages, but don't get me wrong I also agree with you "charlyn".

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This is a nice piece, with a lot of meat although some of it is repetitive. You provided a great example of many supporting points being effectively condensed into a short essay.

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