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I firmly believe that travel is one of the most valuable things to invest our money and time. I have read so many times that we need to focus accumulating memories not things. So if you are young and don't have any children, I would recommend you to go and travel around the world. Learn about cultures because there would be a time when you are going to be busy, and it's not going to be about you anymore but about your kids and life responsibilities.

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Yes, I strongly agree. Travelling can bring a positive outlook in one's life too!
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I love to travel and go to several adventerous placed, but when I got baby I'm more prioritize my child, but now planning and preserving to travel with family.
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Travel
I firmly believe that travel is one of the most valuable things to invest our money time and time money in . I have read so many times that we need to focus on accumulating memories , not things. So if you are young and don't have any children, I would recommend you to go and travel around the world. Learn about cultures because there would be will come a time when you are going to be busy, and it too busy. Your life won ' s not going to t be about you anymore but about your kids and life responsibilities.
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Travel
I firmly constantly believe that travel is one of the most various valuable things points to invest our money and time opportunity . I have read so many several times that we need demand to focus accumulating collecting memories , not things anything . So if you are young and don't have any children, I would recommend suggest you to go and travel around throughout the world. Learn Discover about cultures because there would be a time an opportunity when you are going maintaining to be busy, and it's not going to be about you anymore but about around your kids and life responsibilities competencies .
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