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The Night Skies

When I look up to the skies at night, my soul rejoices in awe about the magnificence of this Universe and it makes me think about our world and how it is is a speck of sand compared to this huge, and unknown space.
Oh night sky you are so beautiful full of stars shining their light on us. My mind wonders and there are not answers about how this came to be.
For know, I am just going to be still and I will keep appreciating your beauty because just a peek of you fills me with happiness.

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Ari! better not to look up the sky.....hehehe
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The Night Skies
When I look watch up to the skies at night, my soul rejoices exults in awe wonder about the magnificence of this Universe and it makes gives me to think about our world and how it is is a speck spot of sand compared to this huge tremendous , and unknown strange space.
Oh
, night sky you are so beautiful gorgeously full of stars shining sparking their light on us. My mind wonders questions and there are not no answers about regarding how this came to be.
For
know now , I am just going succumbing to be still and I will keep continue appreciating your beauty vision because just a peek of you fills me with happiness pleasure .
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The Night Skies
When I look up to the skies at night, my soul rejoices in awe about the magnificence of this Universe and it makes me think about our world and how it is is a speck of sand compared to this huge, and unknown space.
Oh
, night sky , you are so beautiful , full of stars shining their light on us. My mind wonders and there are not no answers about how this came to be.
For
know now , I am just going to will be still and I will keep appreciating your beauty because just a peek of at you fills me with happiness.
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That's a pretty piece. The earnest adoration really wants to be heard. More please! :)
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