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improvements in our shopping centre
To: Trevor John, manager Designer Centre
From: Ana Lopez, designer company employee
Subject: Benicarlo Shopping Centre
INTRODUCTION
This report describes breafly the shoping Centre in Benicarlo, and recommends a few improvements to increase the number of visitants.
THE LOCATION AND DESCRIPTION
The shopping Centre, is located between Benicarlo and Peñiscola. It has the main entrance by 340 road. They are a huge cinemas, a few restaurants, a video games place, a supermarked and a big range of stores.
WHAT IS THE PROBLEM?
Being next to 340road has been the main inconvenient o acceded in it. It is really dangerous to enter in the shopping centre from this road because it is always crowed of cars. The other issue that need to be dealt with is the supermarket. It is not big enought to attract people, and it has the entrance just at the end of a big hall.
IMPROVEMENTS
Due to the difficulty to arribe until there from the main road, if there was a roundabout, costumers would have easy access to do shopping there. I suggest if only the supermarket would be bigger and would had its entrance just next to the parking cars, it would be more attractive to buyers.
CONCLUSION:
If the suggestion that i have done are carried out, the shopping centre will get a great improvement. Especially increasing the number of new stores that would like to take place in this shopping Centre.
Corrections
improvements in our shopping centre
From: Ana Lopez, designer company employee
Subject: Benicarlo Shopping Centre
INTRODUCTION
This report describes
THE LOCATION AND DESCRIPTION
The shopping Centre, is located between Benicarlo and Peñiscola.
WHAT IS THE PROBLEM?
Being next to
IMPROVEMENTS
Due to the difficulty to
CONCLUSION:
If the suggestion that
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improvements
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From: Ana Lopez, designer company employee
Subject: Benicarlo Shopping Centre
INTRODUCTION
This report briefly describes
THE LOCATION AND DESCRIPTION
The shopping Centre
WHAT IS THE PROBLEM?
Being next to
IMPROVEMENTS
CONCLUSION:
If
improvements in our shopping centre
From: Ana Lopez, designer company employee
Subject: Benicarlo Shopping Centre
INTRODUCTION
This report describes
THE LOCATION AND DESCRIPTION
The shopping Centre
WHAT IS THE PROBLEM?
Being next to
IMPROVEMENTS
Due to the difficulty
CONCLUSION:
If the