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Am I fine?
Sometimes, it feels like life is playing games with me or maybe I just made a wrong decision that puts myself in a situation which doesn't makes me happy. It's hard to pretend and show everyone that I'm happy but I'm not because I need to stay there for some reason. I know life is great and I'm patiently hoping for the right time that life will bring me a real happiness that I need not to pretend at all.
Now I learned to be more careful when it comes of making decisions. Nobody's perfect but we can make things right.
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Am I fine?
Sometimes
,
it
feels
like
life
is playing
life
seems
to
play
games with me
,
or maybe I just made a wrong decision
that
puts
myself
,
putting
me
in a situation
which
that
doesn't
makes
make
me happy. It's hard to pretend and show everyone that I'm happy
but
though
I'm not
,
because
for some reason
I need to stay
there
for
some reason
in
that
status
. I know life is great and I'm patiently
hoping
waiting
for the right time
that
life
will
bring
me
a
real
happiness
when
real
happiness
knocks
on
my
door
so
that I
need
not
to
pretend
won't
be
pretending
at all. Now I learned to
be
become
more careful when
it comes of
making decisions. Nobody
's
is
perfect but
we
anyone
can make things right.
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Am I fine?
Sometimes, it feels like life is playing games
with
on
me or maybe I just made a wrong decision that puts myself in a situation
which
doesn
that
didn
't
makes
make
me happy
at all
. It's hard to pretend and show everyone that I'm happy
but
though
I
'm
am
not because I need to stay
there
here
for some reason. I know life is great and I'm patiently hoping for the right time that life will bring me
a
real happiness
and
that I
don't
need
not
to pretend at all.
Now I have learned to be more careful when it comesof
to
decision
making
decisions
. Nobody's perfect but
I believe
we can make things right.
Now I have learned to be more careful when it comes
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Am I fine?
Sometimes, it feels like life is playing games with me
or
maybe
I
just
.
Have
you
ever
made a
wrong
bad
decision that puts
myself
you
in
a
an
unhappy
situation
which doesn't makes me happy.
?
It's hard to pretend
and
show
everyone
that
I'm
happy but
to
be
happy
even
though
I'm not because I need to
stay
there
endure
it
for some reason. I know life is great and I'm patiently hoping for
the right time that
life
will
to
bring me
a
real happiness
that
so
I
don't
need
not
to pretend
at all
anymore
.
Now I 've learned to be more careful when it comesof
to
making decisions. Nobody's perfect
but we can make things right
.
Now I 've learned to be more careful when it comes
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Comment(s)
I've changed your second sentence into a question for the reader/listener. This draws empathy and helps readers keep their attention on you. Mainly, you want to try cutting your ideas into shorter sentences. This way, you become more concise and easier to read. It also helps you figure out what parts are needed and what parts can be pruned off without affecting your main idea. :)
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Am I fine?
Sometimes, it feels like life is playing games with me or
maybe
I
just
i
might
have
made a wrong decision that puts myself in a situation
which
that
doesn't
makes
make
me happy. It
's
is
hard to pretend
and
show
everyone that I'm
like
a
happy
but
I'm
not because
person
and
I need to stay there for some reason. I know
that
life is great and I
'm
am
patiently hoping for the right time that life will bring
me a
real happiness
that
I
need
and
i
will
not
have
to pretend at all.
Now Ilearned
have
learnt
to be more careful when it comes
of
to
making decisions. Nobody
's
is
perfect but we can make things right.
Now I
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Am I fine?
Sometimes, it feels like life is playing games with me or maybe I just made a wrong decision that puts
myself
me
in a situation
which
that
doesn't makes me happy. It's hard to pretend and show everyone that I'm happy
but
when
I'm not because I need to stay there for some reason. I know life is great and I'm patiently hoping for the right time
that
when
life will bring me a real happiness
that
for
which
I
need
do
not
have
to pretend at all.
Now I learned to be more careful when it comesof
to
making decisions. Nobody's perfect but we can make things right.
Now I learned to be more careful when it comes
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