Am I fine?

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Sometimes, it feels like life is playing games with me or maybe I just made a wrong decision that puts myself in a situation which doesn't makes me happy. It's hard to pretend and show everyone that I'm happy but I'm not because I need to stay there for some reason. I know life is great and I'm patiently hoping for the right time that life will bring me a real happiness that I need not to pretend at all.
Now I learned to be more careful when it comes of making decisions. Nobody's perfect but we can make things right.

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Am I fine?
Sometimes , it feels like life is playing life seems to play games with me , or maybe I just made a wrong decision that puts myself , putting me in a situation which that doesn't makes make me happy. It's hard to pretend and show everyone that I'm happy but though I'm not , because for some reason I need to stay there for some reason in that status . I know life is great and I'm patiently hoping waiting for the right time that life will bring me a real happiness when real happiness knocks on my door so that I need not to pretend won't be pretending at all. Now I learned to be become more careful when it comes of making decisions. Nobody 's is perfect but we anyone can make things right.
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Am I fine?
Sometimes, it feels like life is playing games with on me or maybe I just made a wrong decision that puts myself in a situation which doesn that didn 't makes make me happy at all . It's hard to pretend and show everyone that I'm happy but though I 'm am not because I need to stay there here for some reason. I know life is great and I'm patiently hoping for the right time that life will bring me a real happiness and that I don't need not to pretend at all.
Now I
have learned to be more careful when it comes of to decision making decisions . Nobody's perfect but I believe we can make things right.
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Am I fine?
Sometimes, it feels like life is playing games with me or maybe I just . Have you ever made a wrong bad decision that puts myself you in a an unhappy situation which doesn't makes me happy. ? It's hard to pretend and show everyone that I'm happy but to be happy even though I'm not because I need to stay there endure it for some reason. I know life is great and I'm patiently hoping for the right time that life will to bring me a real happiness that so I don't need not to pretend at all anymore .
Now I
've learned to be more careful when it comes of to making decisions. Nobody's perfect but we can make things right .
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I've changed your second sentence into a question for the reader/listener. This draws empathy and helps readers keep their attention on you. Mainly, you want to try cutting your ideas into shorter sentences. This way, you become more concise and easier to read. It also helps you figure out what parts are needed and what parts can be pruned off without affecting your main idea. :)

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Am I fine?
Sometimes, it feels like life is playing games with me or maybe I just i might have made a wrong decision that puts myself in a situation which that doesn't makes make me happy. It 's is hard to pretend and show everyone that I'm like a happy but I'm not because person and I need to stay there for some reason. I know that life is great and I 'm am patiently hoping for the right time that life will bring me a real happiness that I need and i will not have to pretend at all.
Now I
learned have learnt to be more careful when it comes of to making decisions. Nobody 's is perfect but we can make things right.
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Am I fine?
Sometimes, it feels like life is playing games with me or maybe I just made a wrong decision that puts myself me in a situation which that doesn't makes me happy. It's hard to pretend and show everyone that I'm happy but when I'm not because I need to stay there for some reason. I know life is great and I'm patiently hoping for the right time that when life will bring me a real happiness that for which I need do not have to pretend at all.
Now I learned to be more careful when it comes
of to making decisions. Nobody's perfect but we can make things right.
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