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I am writing this essay so that you can improve your English grammar. Let's check out how many mistakes you will find.
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Ram was born in small village of India. When he was 12 years old his dad passed away and he has to work in people's home as chore boy because he has to take care of food of his family, in night he used to study.
Fast forward to 10 years, He got a decent job in a big MNC (hard work pays ), but he couldn't work there for longer because he has to come to office all the way long from his home covering 50kms everyday and he used to get late everyday.

This is a good idea. I will let others correct it so as not to spoil the fun. Then maybe you can try to correct it yourself :)

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Check my grammar
I am writing this essay so that you can improve your English grammar. Let's check out how many mistakes you will find.
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Ram was born in
a small village of in India. When he was 12 years old his dad passed away and he has had to work in people's home homes as chore boy because he has had to take care of food of his family, in and at night he used to study.
Fast forward to 10 years, He got a decent job in a big MNC (hard work pays ), but he couldn't work there for
longer long because he has had to come to office all the way long from his home covering 50kms everyday and he used to get gets late everyday.
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Check my grammar
I am writing this essay so that you can improve your English grammar. Let's check out how many mistakes you will find.
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Ram was born in
a small village of in India. When he was 12 years old , his dad passed away and he has had to work in people's home homes as a chore boy because he has had to take care of the food of for his family , in . At night , he used to study studied .
Fast forward to 10 years later , He he got a decent job in a big MNC multinational corporation (hard work pays ), ) but he couldn't work there for longer long because he has had to come to office all travel a long way to the way long from his home covering 50kms everyday office. He would travel 50 km every day and he used to get be late everyday every day .
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Check my grammar
I am writing this essay so that you can improve your English grammar. Let's check out how many mistakes you will find. ---------- Ram was born in a small village of in India. When he was 12 years old , his dad passed away and so he has to work in people's home homes as chore boy helper because he has to take care of the food of his family , in night he used . He used the night to study.
Fast forward to 10 years Ten years after , He he got a decent job in MNC, a big MNC ( company where hard work pays ), but is being paid. But he couldn't was not able to work there for longer a long time because he is always late. Everday, he has to come to office all the way long from his home covering , which is 50kms everyday and he used to get late everyday away .
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