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Our pets

Let me tell you about our domestic animals. We have a hamster Alisa, Madagascar cockroaches, Chinchilla Cracker and turtle Sem. Cockroaches eat grass and berries, hamster - seeds, chinchilla - hay. A turtle eats only fresh fish.

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Cockroaches??? Aren't they food for the turtle?
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Madagascar cockroaches eat vegetables and grass. A turtle eats only fish.
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Our pets
Let me tell you about our domestic animals pets . We have a hamster named Alisa, Madagascar cockroaches, a Chinchilla called Cracker and a turtle named Sem. Cockroaches The cockroaches eat grass and berries, the hamster - eats seeds, and the chinchilla - eats hay. A The turtle eats only fresh fish.
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"Domestic animals" is strictly correct but it feels more natural to call them "pets." :)
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Thank you
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