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In love

Being in love is weird because you start operating in another rationality, specially if it's unrequited. You see connections in otherwise disconnected things and situations. For example, the person's name appears everywhere: you never read the credits after a movie, but suddenly you look at the screen and there it is; you enter a facebook post about nature fotos and the only photographer name you pay attention to is exactly the homonym; some passerby is interviewed on TV; some specialist is interviewed on TV. And it's not a common name!
Then you decide it's just coincidence, but you start following a new series and one of the main characters looks exactly like him, not only the looks, but also the behavior! You ask some neutral friend and she agrees.
It's better to simply give up understanding!

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In love
Being in love is weird because you start operating in another rationality, specially if it's unrequited. You see connections in otherwise disconnected things the connection or disconnection and situations. For example, if the person's name appears everywhere : , you never read the credits after a movie , but . But suddenly you look at the screen and there it is ; you . You enter a facebook post about nature fotos photos and the only photographer name you pay attention to is exactly the homonym ; some . Some passerby is interviewed on TV ; and some specialist is interviewed on TV. And it It 's not a common name!
Then you decide it's just coincidence, but you start following a new series and one of the main characters looks exactly like him
, not . Not only the looks, but also the behavior it is ! You ask some neutral friend and she agrees.
It's better to simply give up understanding!
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In love
Being in love is weird because you start operating in on another rationality, specially if it's unrequited. You see connections in otherwise disconnected things and situations. For example, the person's name appears everywhere: you never read the credits after a movie, but suddenly you look at the screen and there it is; you enter a facebook post about nature fotos photos and the only photographer 's name you pay attention to is exactly the homonym same ; some passerby is interviewed on TV; some specialist is interviewed on TV. And it's not a common name!
Then you decide it's just coincidence, but you start following a new series and one of the main characters looks exactly like him, not only the looks, but also the behavior! You ask some neutral friend and she agrees.
It's better to simply give up understanding!
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In love
Being in love is weird because you start operating in another rationality, specially especially if it's unrequited. You see connections in otherwise or disconnected things and situations. For example, the person's name appears in everywhere : you . You never read the credits after a movie, but suddenly you look at the screen and there it is ; you . You enter a facebook post about nature fotos photos and the only photographer name you pay attention to is exactly the homonym; some passerby is interviewed on TV; some specialist is interviewed on TV. And it's not a common name!
Then you decide it's just coincidence, but you start following a new series and one of the main characters looks exactly like him, not only the looks, but also the behavior! You ask some neutral friend and she agrees.
It's better to simply give up understanding!
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I see a gradual improvement on your writing. But try not to use " : " and " ; " It's not really necessarily to use in this kinds of paragraph ^^
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