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My perfect vacation

My perfect vacation would be far away from a big city, near a turquoise warm sea. I would go there with my family to relax, to lie in the sun, look at the waves and do nothing. I am not a big fan of swimming. When I go to the beach I prefer to stay in the shade, read a book and drink something fresh. In the evening I like to walk around the town, maybe eat at some restaurant and observe the local people. The older I become the more quiet vacation I need. I wouldn't enjoy staying up until late anymore, go to nightclubs and drink alcohol.
My preferences has changed a lot during the past 10 years.

What about you? What is your perfect vacation?

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Sounds like a great vacation to me! If there was good surf in that warm sea, it'd be perfect!
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Frank.Jefferson
My perfect vacation
My perfect vacation would be far away from a big city, near a warm, turquoise warm sea. I would go there with my family to relax, to lie in the sun, look at the waves and do nothing. I am not a big fan of swimming . When , so when I go to the beach I prefer to stay in the shade, read a book and drink something fresh. In the evening I like to walk around the town, maybe eat at some restaurant and observe the local people. The older I become the more I need a quiet vacation I need . I wouldn't enjoy staying up until late anymore, go going to nightclubs and drink drinking alcohol.
My preferences
has have changed a lot during the past 10 years.

What about you? What is your perfect vacation?
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My perfect vacation
My perfect vacation would be far away from a big city, near a warm, turquoise warm sea. I would go there with my family to relax, to lie in the sun, look at the waves and do nothing. I am not a big fan of swimming. When I go to the beach I prefer to stay in the shade, read a book and drink something fresh. In the evening I like to walk around the town, maybe eat at some restaurant and observe the local people. The older I become the more the quiet vacation I need. I wouldn't enjoy staying up until late anymore , go going to nightclubs and drink or drinking alcohol anymore .
My preferences
has have changed a lot during in the past 10 years.

What about you? What is your perfect vacation?
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My perfect vacation
My perfect vacation would be far away from a big city, near a warm, turquoise warm sea. I would go there with my family to relax, to lie in the sun, look at the waves and do nothing. I am not a big fan of swimming. When I go to the beach I prefer to stay in the shade, read a book and drink something fresh. In the evening I like to walk around the town, maybe eat at some restaurant and observe the local people. The older I become the more quiet vacation I need. I wouldn't enjoy staying up until late anymore, go going to nightclubs and drink , nor drinking alcohol.
My preferences
has have changed a lot during the past 10 years.

What about you? What is your perfect vacation?
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My perfect vacation
My perfect vacation would be far away from a the big city, near a warm, turquoise warm sea. I would go there with my family to relax, to lie in the sun, look at the waves and do nothing . ; I am not a big fan of swimming. When I go to the beach I prefer to stay in the shade, read a book and drink something fresh. In the evening I like to walk around the town, maybe eat at some a restaurant and observe the local people. The older I become the more quiet a vacation I need. I wouldn don 't enjoy staying up until late anymore, go going to nightclubs and drink or drinking alcohol. My preferences has have changed a lot during the past 10 years. What about you? What is your perfect vacation?
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